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how you been my brother ingm?!
does that mean you're drinking and smoking based on what you reading!:p

Citim:

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Po citoj ato që tha kurti
how you been my brother ingm?!
does that mean you're drinking and smoking based on what you reading!:p

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THE ALIENS


you may not believe it
but there are people
who go through life with
very little
friction of distress.
they dress well, sleep well.
they are contented with
their family
life.
they are undisturbed
and often feel
very good.
and when they die
it is an easy death, usually in their
sleep.

you may not believe
it
but such people do
exist.

but i am not one of
them.
oh no, I am not one of them,
I am not even near
to being
one of
them.
but they
are there

and I am
here.

...and i am here too Ingm...

Citim:

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Po citoj ato që tha Agent Provocateur
...and i am here too Ingm...

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SHE SAID


what are you doing with all those paper
napkins in your car?
we dont have napkins like
that
how come your car radio is
always turned to some
rock and roll station?do you drive around with
some
young thing?

you're
dripping tangerine
juice on the floor.
whenever you go into
the kitchen
this towel gets
wet and dirty,
why is that?

when you let my
bathwater run
you never
clean the
tub first.

why don't you
put your toothbrush
back
in the rack?

you should always
dry your razor

sometimes
I think
you hate
my cat.

Martha says
you were
downstairs
sitting with her
and you
had your
pants off.

you shouldn't wear
those
$100 shoes in
the garden

and you don't keep
track
of what you
plant out there

that's
dumb

you must always
set the cat's bowl back
in
the same place.

don't
bake fish
in a frying
pan...

I never saw
anybody
harder on the
brakes of their
car
than you.

let's go
to a
movie.

listen what's
wrong with you?
you act
depressed.

Besieged

you see, this wall is green and that wall is
blue and the 3rd wall has eyes and
the last wall is crawling with angry famished
spiders.

no, that wall is a sheet of frozen water
and the other is one of melting was
and the 3rd frames my grandmother's face
and the 4th spills the bones of my father

outside is the city, the city outside, a thing that
creeps to the call of bells and lights,
the city is an open grave,
so I never dare to venture forth but
rather remain and hide within
disconnect the phone
lower the shades and
cut the
lights.

the city is more cruel than the walls
and finally the walls are all we have
and
almost nothing is
far better than nothing at all.

Re: Besieged

Citim:

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Po citoj ato që tha ingmetalboy
you see, this wall is green and that wall is
blue and the 3rd wall has eyes and
the last wall is crawling with angry famished
spiders.

no, that wall is a sheet of frozen water
and the other is one of melting was
and the 3rd frames my grandmother's face
and the 4th spills the bones of my father

outside is the city, the city outside, a thing that
creeps to the call of bells and lights,
the city is an open grave,
so I never dare to venture forth but
rather remain and hide within
disconnect the phone
lower the shades and
cut the
lights.

the city is more cruel than the walls
and finally the walls are all we have
and
almost nothing is
far better than nothing at all.

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Me pelqen si e ke perkthyer. Nuk tingellon dhe aq e huaj edhe ne shqip. Ishin dy fjale qe do te vecoja per ti rimenduar.
kur Bukowski shkruan:
"outside is the city, the city outside, a thing that
CREEPS to the call of bells and lights,"
ju e keni perkthyer:
"Përjasha është qyteti, qyteti përjashta, dicka
që ZVARRITET pas thirrjes së sirenave dhe sinjaleve"

creeps - ketu shpreh me shume se zvarritje, shpreh nje lloj negativizmi dhe neverie ndaj qytetit. Nuk po gjej fjalen e duhur tani por mendoj dicka si "peshtiros".


dhe ne vargun tjeter:
"[B]DISCONNECT[B] the phone"
ju shkruani:
"MBYLL telefonin"

disconnect - nuk jam dakort thjesht me mbyll mbasi mbyll nenkupton idene qe po fliste me dike, do te sugjeroja "shkepus". Shpreh me sakte qellimet e autorit ne kete rast.

Fundin pastaj nuk ta mora vesh fare. Me duket sikur ke harruar ndonje fjale plus disa gabime ortografike nga shpejtesia e te shkruarit ne tastiere.

Citim:

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Po citoj ato që tha ingmetalboy
Me pelqen si e ke perkthyer. Nuk tingellon dhe aq e huaj edhe ne shqip. Ishin dy fjale qe do te vecoja per ti rimenduar.
kur Bukowski shkruan:
"outside is the city, the city outside, a thing that
[B]CREEPS to the call of bells and lights,"
ju e keni perkthyer:
"Përjasha është qyteti, qyteti përjashta, dicka
që ZVARRITET pas thirrjes së sirenave dhe sinjaleve"

creeps - ketu shpreh me shume se zvarritje, shpreh nje lloj negativizmi dhe neverie ndaj qytetit. Nuk po gjej fjalen e duhur tani por mendoj dicka si "peshtiros".


dhe ne vargun tjeter:
"DISCONNECT[B] the phone"
ju shkruani:
"MBYLL telefonin"

disconnect - nuk jam dakort thjesht me mbyll mbasi mbyll nenkupton idene qe po fliste me dike, do te sugjeroja "shkepus". Shpreh me sakte qellimet e autorit ne kete rast.

Fundin pastaj nuk ta mora vesh fare. Me duket sikur ke harruar ndonje fjale plus disa gabime ortografike nga shpejtesia e te shkruarit ne tastiere.

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