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-- Narrative essay, important things (http://www.forumihorizont.com/showthread.php3?threadid=6155)

Hello Tini!

Oh man, I have to tell you that I got impressed when reading your text. I am not the most adecuated person to correct it so I have saved it to send to another person who can do it better than me. I see that you have changed your original message, does it mean that the first version is not valid?
I have found more information about Narrative Essays, because what I posted in my prior message was some features for writing essays (in general), but a “narrative essay” required specific features like it must be written in first person (I didn’t know this:p). So check this out, it may help you.

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/narrative.html

http://www.rscc.cc.tn.us/owl&writin.../Narration.html

and some samples here:

http://www.rscc.cc.tn.us/owl&writin...WL/Leandro.html and
http://www.rscc.cc.tn.us/owl&writin.../OWL/Small.html